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Darkly seduced with the pleasure of pain
Sinful acts, my good side now slain
Tempting evil wonders with a burning desire
Willing to be consumed by this dark erotic fire

The light has now left me so empty and alone
Dark rises to power and takes its wanted throne
Blood mixed with drops of a sexual love
Fits my soul like nothing from above

Hot wild passion from deep within
Take control and I want it to win
Nothing needed now but to just embrace
This truly evil feeling as I hide my face

When the deed is done my power holds your soul
To do as I want no matter how foul
Opening up your darkest fears
Turning them to blood soaked tears.
Feel free to NOTE me on any grammar or spelling mistakes.
I am always willing to learn. .
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Seaxwulf Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Prying. And primal. I've often had feelings like that. Most men do. But there are levels and spheres. Ah, but metaphysical mumbo-jumbo aside. I do so enjoy your words, I could have written them myself, they are so poignant.
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the compliment and the fav !
I can't speak for all females, just myself and how I feel :blackrose:
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Seaxwulf Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. Thank you for taking the time to compose and find heart to post your feelings.
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Shades-Of-Lethe Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Superb and darkly alluring... Love it!! :heart: 
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :heart:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Professional Writer
I love this hun! :blackrose:

Let your dark side flow and reign
No holding back, set it free
Ebony wings soaring and high
As souls cry in the burning fire

Sorry I couldn't resist :huggle:
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Resistance is futile !
Never be sorry, you are one of the best writers and humans I know, and you are very loved :heart: :iconcocoglompplz:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Professional Writer
:aww: Thank you love :heart: :tighthug:
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segura2112 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lovely dark piece, inspires kinky thoughts (sorry). Thank You
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't be sorry hun, Tank you for the fav and compliment :blackrose:
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