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Darkly seduced with the pleasure of pain
Sinful acts, my good side now slain
Tempting evil wonders with a burning desire
Willing to be consumed by this dark erotic fire

The light has now left me so empty and alone
Dark rises to power and takes its wanted throne
Blood mixed with drops of a sexual love
Fits my soul like nothing from above

Hot wild passion from deep within
Take control and I want it to win
Nothing needed now but to just embrace
This truly evil feeling as I hide my face

When the deed is done my power holds your soul
To do as I want no matter how foul
Opening up your darkest fears
Turning them to blood soaked tears.
Feel free to NOTE me on any grammar or spelling mistakes.
I am always willing to learn. .
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siatimmons Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
Exactly how it is sometimes. I think you have a way with words to express emotions that are so deep, most of us aren't aware of them, and can't put them into words like you. 
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Seaxwulf Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Prying. And primal. I've often had feelings like that. Most men do. But there are levels and spheres. Ah, but metaphysical mumbo-jumbo aside. I do so enjoy your words, I could have written them myself, they are so poignant.
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the compliment and the fav !
I can't speak for all females, just myself and how I feel :blackrose:
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Seaxwulf Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. Thank you for taking the time to compose and find heart to post your feelings.
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Shades-Of-Lethe Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Superb and darkly alluring... Love it!! :heart: 
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :heart:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Professional Writer
I love this hun! :blackrose:

Let your dark side flow and reign
No holding back, set it free
Ebony wings soaring and high
As souls cry in the burning fire

Sorry I couldn't resist :huggle:
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Resistance is futile !
Never be sorry, you are one of the best writers and humans I know, and you are very loved :heart: :iconcocoglompplz:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Professional Writer
:aww: Thank you love :heart: :tighthug:
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segura2112 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lovely dark piece, inspires kinky thoughts (sorry). Thank You
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't be sorry hun, Tank you for the fav and compliment :blackrose:
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ScraNo Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
When Pluto is conjuncting Venus in the 5th, or Venus 8th house Scorpio!

This would exactly fit your poem.
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That sounds cool, thanks for the info . :blackrose:
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautifully written, tells how we let our dark side take control and revel in it  Heart  Love  Clap 
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you hun :heart: :blackrose:
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Always a pleasure to read your poems,   :hug:  :blowkiss:
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almosthuman75 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Wonderfully written!!! :-)
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :blackrose:
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TanukiTagawa Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
 I no will tell nothing about your grammar mistakes,because I also do the mines,when I write my fanfics. ^^; Now,I´d like say that,if I were you,I´d give more information about the character:isn´t possible know if is man or woman,pretty or ugly,etc. :shrug: Also is easy realize that you´re pessimist about the vampires. :oops: I think that a vampire also can be good. :greetings:
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, but it has nothing to do with vampires it is about me a human and the struggle with inner demons  and  choosing to let the evil take control instead of the good. :)
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TanukiTagawa Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
 Well,I guess that´s better when a vampire overcome their evil side to do the right thing.The oldest example that is remember is Michael Knight,of the series Forever Knight.In more recent times,Angel. 8-)
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Olaf68 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013   Traditional Artist
very nice 
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you !
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Olaf68 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013   Traditional Artist
no problem :}
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Student Artist
wow vary dark but I like it
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you hun :blackrose:
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Student Artist
your welcome
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vampirekingdom Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013   Digital Artist
It's awesome lady!
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
 Thank you hun :hug:
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Godnhumans Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Professional General Artist
The Nightman Cometh
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
He sure did :blackrose:
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Professional Writer
Fantastic use of couplets... :clap:
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :heart:
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Professional Writer
Always very welcome :hug:
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silentfuneral Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013   Digital Artist
:headbang: "Blood mixed with drops of a sexual love
Fits my soul like nothing from above"
 freaking awesomeness!!:headbang: 
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :evillaugh:
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lala1022 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
truely beatiful a work of art speaks to the darkness within our souls
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much and for the fav  :blackrose:
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Aqureshi1 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
Wow.....

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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Good wow or bad wow? either way thanks :)
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Aqureshi1 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
In awe wow
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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Aqureshi1 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
Your welcome!
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silentfuneral Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013   Digital Artist
:wow: Magnificent! :wow: sweetheart this is amazing!! :jawdrop:
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much hun :blackrose: :hug:
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Russianbear09 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful, but horrifying I like it.
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :evillaugh:
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anthonycrowley Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Professional Writer
Very well written work  my dear & thank you for the expression and descriptive flow of sensual ease,it is always a wonderful escape ,such as being covered with the beauty of your skin .. :) AC Floating  x
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the kind words sweets, its nice to know my work appreciated and thanks for the fav :blackrose:
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anthonycrowley Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Professional Writer
its my pleasure my dear :) AC xx
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