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Singing to me a symphony of death
The strain in my body with every last breath
Draining my life a soul torn apart
Needing only time with this slow beating heart

The tune of my soul is dying within
This aging carcass is wearing so thin
Notes of life will soon lose their tune
As I'm sitting here so empty in this prison, my room

This song is now reaching the end of it's time
Nothing to leave for you but this poorly writ rhyme
But hope goes out for the one who does care
Because in your heart my music is there...
Love you.

Please feel free to correct my grammar by note on any of my written works.
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Richtofensmyhusband Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
This is just lovely!
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much and also for the fav :D
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KarahRobinson-Art Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is beautiful :wow: :love: 
Could be sang beautifully too! 
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you and for the fav :blackrose:
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Shades-Of-Lethe Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Deeply amazing! :heart: 
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :heart:
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anthonycrowley Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Professional Writer
Fantastic artwork :) I like & admire them all,It's a comfort like a second skin of strength ,when I gaze at these creative images of deep,beautiful visionary thoughts.... AC x
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Melanie-J-Howle Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for your kind words :iconblackheartplz:
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racerman56 Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautifully written....
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