Singing to me a symphony of death
The strain in my body with every last breath
Draining my life a soul torn apart
Needing only time with this slow beating heart
The tune of my soul is dying within
This aging carcass is wearing so thin
Notes of life will soon lose their tune
As I'm sitting here so empty in this prison, my room
This song is now reaching the end of it's time
Nothing to leave for you but this poorly writ rhyme
But hope goes out for the one who does care
Because in your heart my music is there...
This is just lovely!
This is beautiful
Could be sang beautifully too!
Fantastic artwork I like & admire them all,It's a comfort like a second skin of strength ,when I gaze at these creative images of deep,beautiful visionary thoughts.... AC x
...Absolutely Amazing job...
awesome Mel....flows and weaves
very nice, has an ease of flow and feeling.
This is a very well-written piece. I love the rhyming and the message. The tone of death.. It's a nice concept.
Love can be our salvation. We think of death and we feel empty inside but a caring soul with a warm heart can save us. The symphony of death turns into a sweet love song. This was really good with an uplifting ending.
Very beautiful =3
Very nice, very moving.
This is tremendous, I feel it and I love you.
nice song vary touching